Monday, May 14, 2012

Olden Time Diary

Author's note: I wrote this like I lived in the olden time. I talked about how the boys are jousting in a big tournament.    

Dear Diary,
  Today is thy day, thy big jousting tournament. Where Master Charles and Master John will, I can’t wait until to see who will win thy big tournament. Right now I am in my room thy tallest room in the tower getting ready. While I was getting dressed I heard thy boys warming up.

I bid thou farewell,
Marabeth McKinns Lady Lord

Thursday, May 10, 2012

Under The Sea- cliff hangers

Author"s note: This is a short story is about three kids have fun in the beach and one of them stumble upon a castle.   

“Tweet” as the lifeguard blow his whistle telling everyone they can go back into the water. “sweet” yelled Taylor as she ran into the ocean water. “Hey who wants to play monkey in the middle”? asked  Alex. “Me” I said. “I call the middle” said Taylor. After playing the longest time with Taylor in the middle Alex finally got into the middle. Taylor throw the beach ball so far if want into the deep end. So as I was going to go get the ball I tripped on a rock and headed for the water. When I went head under I saw a tiny little bright sea horse, so I decided to follow it. As we got deeper and deeper I heard Taylor yelling “Summer, where did you go”? When we got just barely to the ocean floor where there was this pearly white castle with seashells around the windows and sand dollars for the door. And then suddenly the door opened...  

Monday, May 7, 2012

Symbolism

This short story took place during the summer.
It was a summer night at the park.
There was a soft breeze on that warm summer night.
While at the park they saw stars covering the sky.
When you are at a park you would usually see green from trees and bushes.
If you have have ever been to a park at night you would probably see bats eating mosquitos.
This park was full of everygreens and dead trees and weeping willows.
This girl wante to see and or talk to her crush and he was in her brothers room.