Thank You

Author's Note: This is alternet ending to the piece "Thank You Ma'am". I choose to do it on whent Roger comes back to say thank you.

At the same time as Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones shut the door Rodger stood there just looking at the door, making a memory in his brain. A memory of what her door looked like, and the building, so he could come back and visit her again. When Roger first met Mrs. Jones he hated her but, in the end her started to like her because of what she did of him.

As their lives went on Roger decided to go back a visit Mrs. Jones since he never got to say thank you for what she did and gave him. So the next day Roger head out to and remember what her building looks like. Once he got there he knocked on the door and asked for Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones. When Roger first saw her there he couldn’t believe it, she looked so different. At first it was a little awkward between them but, after a while they just kept on talking. The first thing Roger said to Mrs. Jones was thank you. Mrs. Jones was all confused she didn’t know what was going on.

“I’m sorry, what are you saying thank you for?” Asked Mrs. Jones

“For the lesson you taught me and the money, you know when you brought me to you house.” Replied Roger

“Oh yes of course, I’m happy to help. And the lesson did it help you?” Asked Mrs. Jones

“Um, yes it did.” Said Roger

“Good, so how have you been, what have you been up to?” She asked, as she made some lunch.  

“I’ve been good the usual, just got a job a few months ago and you?”

 “I’ve been great and still working here throughout the years.”

They continued talking until Roger had to leave. And from that day on Roger went back every month to visit  Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones, and they would just talk for hours until the day ended.       

I choose this ending because Roger was being taught a lesson form Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones and he never got to say thank you. So I decided to do a ending where Roger goes back to and visit and say thank you. 

The Golden Hook

Authors Note: In the writing lab we read a story and didn’t finish it completely. So we had to come up with a reasonable ending of what we think will happen.

A few months after Cody buried Clarence and took home the golden hook. He put it on the shelf right above his trophies in his room. A couple of days after he brought it home he realized that the hook was gone as if it vanished. He searched everywhere but it just didn’t show up. After a while Cody just stopped looking. He didn’t feel that bad since he took if from Clarence. Cody continued to look throughout the days but it still didn’t show up. After that he just stopped looking and caring. Then one day out of the blue the golden hook showed up, and through the days that it was missing Cody was having  karma and bad luck. He hadn’t realized it at first but then when the hook showed up it all seemed to disappear. While the hook was missing Cody kept on dropping some of his most valuable things or losing them. Since that was happening Cody couldn’t figure out why that kept on happening. Until one day later, he realized that he had never had karma before until those past days while the hook was missing. Since Cody didn’t want karma any more he decided to visit Clarence’s grave and return his golden hook. Once he returned the hook Cody’s life continued on and didn’t have any more bad luck.                 

Changing Personalities

Author’s Note: This piece is a character analyses. For my piece I am doing a bio poem. I choose  Mona from the “Pretty Little Liars” series. Throughout the series Mona has three different personalities.    

Mona

Daughter of Mark and Joanne.

Lover of school, family.  

Who feels happy when at school and cheerless when rejected by the popular girls at school.    

Loved when with family.  

Who gives a pleasant mood.

Who fears getting made fun of.   

A resident of Rosewood, Pennsylvania.

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Mona

Daughter of Mark and Joanne.   

Lover of shopping, make-up, and friends.

Who feels happy when with friends.   

Loved when with friends and family.  

Who gives friendly advice and support.

Who fears losing her friend.

A resident of Rosewood, Pennsylvania.

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Mona

Daughter of Mark and Joanne.

Lover of evil, making peoples life miserable, and playing cards.   

Who feels safe in the clinic.

Loved when friends come to visit.

Who gives a bad scene to people.  

Who fears of losing her friend, Hanna.   

A resident of Rosewood, Pennsylvania.

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In the end Mona is the way she is because Mona got sick and tired of her friend Hanna not listening and not being there for her. Also because Mona always got picked on and bullied by Hanna's friend Allison. So she goes against them and tries to get back at them for everything that Allison did to her.           

Mona reminds me of Matt from the book “Deadly Little Secret”. In a way there are somewhat alike because in the beginning of each book they are both innocent and nice. And then comes the middle of the book and Mona turns into the popular girl and is snotty to everyone. While Matt is getting suspicious by the minute. Then comes the end of the book and Mona has turned into evil, she is trying to ruin everyone’s life. As Matt turns into the bad guy who tries to kidnap someone.