Thursday, November 29, 2012

Thank You

Author's Note: This is alternet ending to the piece "Thank You Ma'am". I choose to do it on whent Roger comes back to say thank you.

At the same time as Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones shut the door Rodger stood there just looking at the door, making a memory in his brain. A memory of what her door looked like, and the building, so he could come back and visit her again. When Roger first met Mrs. Jones he hated her but, in the end her started to like her because of what she did of him.
As their lives went on Roger decided to go back a visit Mrs. Jones since he never got to say thank you for what she did and gave him. So the next day Roger head out to and remember what her building looks like. Once he got there he knocked on the door and asked for Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones. When Roger first saw her there he couldn’t believe it, she looked so different. At first it was a little awkward between them but, after a while they just kept on talking. The first thing Roger said to Mrs. Jones was thank you. Mrs. Jones was all confused she didn’t know what was going on.
“I’m sorry, what are you saying thank you for?” Asked Mrs. Jones
“For the lesson you taught me and the money, you know when you brought me to you house.” Replied Roger
“Oh yes of course, I’m happy to help. And the lesson did it help you?” Asked Mrs. Jones
“Um, yes it did.” Said Roger
“Good, so how have you been, what have you been up to?” She asked, as she made some lunch.  
“I’ve been good the usual, just got a job a few months ago and you?”
 “I’ve been great and still working here throughout the years.”
They continued talking until Roger had to leave. And from that day on Roger went back every month to visit  Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones, and they would just talk for hours until the day ended.       
I choose this ending because Roger was being taught a lesson form Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones and he never got to say thank you. So I decided to do a ending where Roger goes back to and visit and say thank you. 

1 comment:

  1. NICE WORK, ROGER IS CHANGED. DOES ROGER GO ON TO "PAY IT FORWARD" IN ANY WAY?

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